Fist draft
I have never had any special relationship with the pets because I am not allow to have pet in the house. People love their pets just because pets spend time with them, you don’t have to have reason to love something. You love it just because you love it, no need for reasoning.
Animal have these qualities that made them human’s best friend:
- they love us
- they need us
- spend time with us when ever we need
- they are giving their life to us without asking for payback
Draft with corrections
I have never had any special relationship with the pets because I am not allow to have pet in the house. I think people love their pets just because pets spend time with them, you don’t have to have reason to love something. You love it just because you love it. No need for reasoning.
Animal have these qualities that made them human’s best friend:
- they love us
- they need us
- spend time with us whenever we need
- they are giving their life to us without asking for anything back
3rd Draft
I have never had any special relationship with the pets because I am not allowed to have pet in the house. I think people love their pets just because pets spend time with them. You don’t have to have reason to love something. You love it just because you love it, no need for reasoning.
Animals have these qualities that made them human’s best friend:
3rd Draft
I have never had any special relationship with the pets because I am not allowed to have pet in the house. I think people love their pets just because pets spend time with them. You don’t have to have reason to love something. You love it just because you love it, no need for reasoning.
Animals have these qualities that made them human’s best friend:
- they love us
- they need us
- spend time with us whenever we need
- they are giving their life to us without asking for anything back
"because I am not allow to have pet in the house." (in this case, allowed, not allow. We will usually allow something or not be allowed to do something)
ReplyDeleteI think people love their pets just because pets spend time with them, you don’t have to have reason to love something (two sentences in one. Separate them.)
No need for reasoning. (Not a sentence)
Animal have these qualities (All animals, so you must say 'Animals)