People always have to make choses in their lives some are easy and some others are hard. I have face the chose of what am i going to do for the rest of my life these days. The pressure will be stronger as i go through high school and it is bothering me already. The reason it is bothering me is that i have no idea of what i am going to do as a job or major in my life. I know i am very interest in biology but i defiantly don't want to be a doctor. That is decided when i was very young, i do not want to be a doctor. I can try something else that has to do with biology or novels, for i love reading novels so much, but i don't that those might support me. So this is my choses, i don't know what to do and i don't know what to pick.
I would love to stay with my friends while taking the classes, like even though i am in basketball team already and i really don't need to take any more PE class i still take PE class next semester just to stay with my friends. My parents effect the chose i am going to make too. Although they said everything is in my hand, they are the reason i do not want to be doctor. Also as they talk about it with me i know they want me to have a job, with pretty good of paid. The teachers that teaches the class also effect the chose too. If the teachers make the class really boring than i might not find myself too interest about it but if the teacher make it fun then i would really want to learn about it
Good work Jingmin. Keep up the work. I'm noticing the improvements in your writing.
ReplyDeleteA couple of notes:
You are very "interested' in biology, not "interest."
You are "on" the basketball team, not "in" it.
Your parents affect the "choices"
"have a job, with pretty good of paid." should be "have a job with good pay" or a "good paying job"
Keep it up girl, you're doing well.
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